Hi can anyone help me out, I'm rubbish at this sort of thing.
I'm wanting a simple rhyme to put on a card for acceptance to be bridesmaid at my best friends wedding.
I've started something like this.
To my best friends Joanna and Barry
I'm so happy that your going to marry

Now I need things along the lines of being chuffed they have picked me and how hounered i am etc etc.

Can any one help , Please need something befor 3:30pm today. Not long I know.

Michelle.

To my best friends Joanna and Barry
To be part of Your Day
In so Special a way
Makes me happy you're going to marry

What wonderful news it is to hear
That you are going to marry!
I am just so thrilled to be
'BRIDESMAID' for Joanne and Barry.
The dearest friends a girl could have
You've really made my day.
I'm honoured to be part of it,
More than words can say.
You really are the best you know,
It means more than I could tell.
So thanks again my greatest friends.
Loads of Love ,
Michelle
Is this too long or too mushy?
Sue

My Friends I'm lost for words
That you've honoured me this way
That I can Fullfill my dream
and share your special Day
A happy Life i wish for you
May all your dreams come true
And All the happiness in the world
Be Granted to You two.

PS I think its best not to include names but anyway this is my offering :)

Mattie,

I was just going to suggest your name :-) but here you are and it is very good.

You have a nautral talent of bringing the words, meaning & rhyme altogether :-)

Pam

Thats brilliant Mattie, really nice :)

Geoff :)

Mattie, ever thought of writing a book of poems to sell in aid of a charity?:)

Well we do happen to have one ;)

Joanna & Barry
Are going to marry
At least, that the rumour spread!

I’m proud to say
Being part of your day
Would be the best thing since sliced bread!

Hi everyone.
Thank you all so much for your help,
I didn't expect that much response so quickly.
They are all very good, which makes it hard to choose, but I think I know which one I'm going to use, but I'll keep it a secret,
Thanks to all of you again.

Michelle.